Radhika Saini
Social Anxiety Disorder is one of the most common disorder yet people hesitate to accept the fact that they might be experiencing a mental trauma. An individual’s growth is dependent upon different aspect and mental health plays an extremely important role in our life. An individuals cannot progress untill they’re fit both physically & psychologically. Therefor, to all the people out there that if this happens to any of you- accept it! Just remind yourselves that it is okay to ask for help, it is okay to face something like this and we all are born with certain flaws and it’s not a crime! We all are humans and it can be controlled and conquered. We should seek professional guidance or maybe talk to our parents or teachers who can guide us. It is about believing in yourselves! So, believe that you are a fighter and you will conquer it, it may take some time but you are going to win. So-
Anxiety is common and it can happen with us too!
But if you observe closely you have to be just you!
It may take days maybe even months,
But one day it can easily be conquered.
Not by anyone else but only by you
For there is no one else who can be as sparkling as you
The content above is actually a short intro of a video I created. If anyone of you is not able to view it then here is the link of the same-
https://youtu.be/fFgbto-eWLM
Kindly comment & give your views as to how I can improvise.
This was written so beautifully and its meaning is as beautiful as it ready is but I would really love it more if there were no gramatical mistakes !
Thanks Ishita! Would surely keep that in mind.
Nice article but very short, a bit more information and facts would be of help. Beautifully written and described.
Thank you for the suggestion!
Were you able to view the video with it? It’s actually a video and this is a short intro about the same.
amazing article ..kudos buddy 🙂
Thank you so much!!
Were you able to view the video with it? It’s actually a video and this is a short intro about the same.
The language of the article is easy to compherend and words used a beautiful however, you could have addes more information.
Thanks Taru. Will work on it!
Were you able to view the video with it? It’s actually a video and this is a short intro about the same.
Inspiring and warming, however it is too short. Maybe include more information on symptoms, causes, treatment and so on.
Thanks Larisa! It’s actually a short intro with a video. Please do let me know if you were able to view the video.
I’m afraid I couldn’t see a video option 🙁
ohh… thanks for telling that
here’s the link
https://youtu.be/fFgbto-eWLM
Well Written but very short
Thanks Aakriti! It’s actually a short intro with a video. I guess you guys aren’t able to view the video. Given below is the link for the same-
https://youtu.be/fFgbto-eWLM
Very well articulated, really liked how you’ve tried to explain everything through the video. Nice content.
Thank you very much!
Your writing was great, and your video was extremely interesting. Your content would definitely make a difference in the world.
Thank you so much
amazing but it is too short. next time you can include treatments, types etc.
Good article but it could be more in detail.
Really a short, crisp and sweet piece of writing. It will surely boost one’s self-belief and also urges one to stay hopeful for a better tomorrow no matter how bleak today is. Looking forward to reading more of your works!
Thanks
i saw the video as well, its informative. just a suggestion if you could change the font on a couple of places in the video i think it would be easier to read, and also add less information on one page
Thank you! Will surely take this into consideration.
Very well written. I was looking forward to it being a little longer and more informative.
Thanks. It’s actually a short intro of a video. Could you please check my pinned comment.
It is a bit short,if you can research more and add it will be helpful
Thanks. It’s actually a short intro of a video. Could you please check my pinned comment.
Sweet and short! I understand that it’s an intro for a video you made. It gives brief knowledge about the disorder before moving to the video. Good work!
Thank you so much dear!
Seeking help from a psychologist is not a strange thing people must understand this and those are experiencing disorders like social anxiety disorder must be provided the required care.
Totally agreed! We need to move past the taboos and social stigmas as a society to grow and be a better version of ourselves.
you could also add ways to overcome it
Hi Megha! It’s actually a short intro of a video. You can check out my pinned comment for the video link.
The Social Anxiety Disorder is one such psychological aspect which initially concerns on the Social norms of the present environment. On the other side, the content was very much relevant according to me.
Yes, it depends on the social environment as well as the psychological or mental condition of a person.
The above written content is actually a short intro for a video. It would really help if you could check out the video and give your views about it.
You could have focused on how anxiety bothers people and the motive the main point was well cleared though.
The above written content is actually a short intro for a video. It would really help if you could check out the video and give your views about it.
Yes I will
You can check my pinned comment for the video link.
Yes
You can use grammarly to check for grammatical errors. Good job on the article☺️
Thank you! Yes, I did use grammarly.
Wow good job
Very informative article! You’ve explained it in a very simple language.
It’s beautiful
Proud of you my dear girl! You have weaved words on an extremely important issue beautifully and appropriately. God bless!
May the power of your ‘Pen’ never lose its grip.
The language is really simple which makes it easy to relate but it would have been better if you added more information and little bit about the consequences and symptoms and also the time period for it’s prevalence. It would have been great if you could add some coping strategies. Overall it was really nice. Keep up the good work.
Thank you! The above written content is actually a short intro for a video. It would really help if you could check out the video and give your views about it. You can check my pinned comment for the video link.
Loved it!
Social Anxiety Disorder is what most of the people face in varying intensity. It is really a short, crisp piece of writing. A suggestion if you could research more and add more material it would add more value to your article. Looking forward to reading more of your work!!
Thank you! The above written content is actually a short intro for a video. It would really help if you could check out the video and give your views about it. You can check my pinned comment for the video link.
The topic chosen for the article is important, especially in today’s world, and I admire your effort to further the discussion. A lot of good points have been made, and the video was extremely informative. I would suggest, however, that some topics that are sensitive should be tackled efficiently. For example, instead of telling people to “just accept it”, it could have been addressed more efficiently and realistically, which would benefit a lot of readers. And also, proofreading your article before submitting in order to avoid any errors. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
Thank you! Will surely keep this in mind!
Very beautifully written!!
Thank you!
Many of us go through social anxiety these days and we think we are the only ones going through it but it is actually very common. A very precise article!
Thanks!
Short an sweet work. Can add some points to make it more informative. Good work.
Thank you! The above written content is actually a short intro for a video. It would really help if you could check out the video and give your views about it. You can check my pinned comment for the video link.
sure.
A well written article. It is easily understood. Great work
Anxiety is common and it can happen with us too so this type of anxiety that is mentioned above is truly a problematic one that connecting with them is difficult so we should know that they need help. You reached me ance again thank you .
Agreed! We should always look around ourselves & try to help people who need help.
Thanks for your feedback!
Well I have anxiety issues and it gets really difficult when you are on the spot like you’ll have difficulty in speaking, socialising! Overall a brief post but it’s really motivating and that’s great! But can you make people aware more about what social anxiety disorder is like and how to overcome it, it would be great
I hope you are able to overcome it one day & don’t hesitate to message me if you ever need help.
Thank you so much for your feedback! The above written content is actually a short intro for a video. It would really help if you could check out the video and give your views about it. You can check my pinned comment for the video link.
Yup very rightly said social anxiety happens well i found it relevant reading goodd
Thanks!
the article is really good short but to the point.
Thank you so much for your feedback! The above written content is actually a short intro for a video. It would really help if you could check out the video and give your views about it. You can check my pinned comment for the video link.
The article was short, crisp and to the point. Good job!
Thank you!
hey, it would be greatly beneficial and meaningful if you attached the link in the article itself.
I know Leanne. I actually did do that but unfortunately, it’s not visible due to some technical issue & I can’t edit the published work. So, this was the only way I could provide the viewers with the video.
Sorry for the inconvenience!