Nidhi Dahiya
You can see me
You can feel my happiness and pain
You can touch me
You listen my words of silence
But the thing which you have never seen and never felt that I’m afraid…
afraid of being a girl
You don’t know and you will never know that because of this fear
every minute, every second
I’m dying on inside
I’m afraid of fire, fast flowing water, heights, darkness and even afraid of being you as a man….
Nidhi, This poem has a really deep meaning and every girl can actually relate to it. I would be love to read more of it.
One can never give a girl that kind of freedom she deserves. You through your poem have explained the kinds of problems a girl has to face. Your poem is deep and has a great meaning. It explains the current scenario.
Can’t agree more. Thank you for your support@Sani Lavakush
Thank you so much@Suja P
I am highly impressed with the content of your post and it is wonderfully written!
Thank you so much@Rizul Gupta
Your work is unbelievable. It makes me feel so many emotions, it tickles my senses, stimulates my lacrimal glands. I would have loved it to be longer and highlighting more women insecurities. Hats off, you’re brilliant!
Such a lovely peom, I can feel you emotions right through this peom. Being a girl ain’t a easy job. We have to do almost everything from studying to work to cook to please everyone to look like barbies to earn. It’s almost like we are superheroines(Ya for a change). I wish we(girl/women)just get a little more respect.
*poem
Such a lovely poem, I can feel your emotions right through this poem. Being a girl ain’t a easy job. We have to do almost everything from studying to work to cook to give birth to please people to earn & the list is endless. It’s almost like we are superheroines. Embrace the feminine energy.
Thank you ❤️ and I agree with you.
Glad you liked it. Thank you so much@Sreejita Sarkar
Thank you @Sreejita Sarkar for your support and encouragement.
It’s amazing
Thank you@Sreejita Sarkar
Well written its small but on sopt! It’s truly difficult to be female. Everyday our motive is to prove our selves that we are no less then men. Females multi task with everything and yet we are the inferior to men.
Beautifully expressed!! Every girl can relate to this. Quite insightful!! Keep up the good work 🙂
Thank you so much@Simran Rai
It’s short but so meaningful and so sweet. Nice work.
Thank you@Prashamsa
Thank you so much@Natasha shah. I can’t agree more with what you are saying.
I relate with the topic, its scary being afab. We consist of half the population still it feels like we don’t belong. Working through this feeling of not belonging we must stick together and make other women feel safe and protected and let then know that they are not a burden, they are not just an object to be invested in until sold off to marriage. We are more than that and we will show them.
The poem itself shows a good point but to make it more appealing to the readers you can try using some figures of speech like simili or alliteration, oxymoron or metaphor. Try including more rhyming words. Good job 🙂
Thank you so much @Bhavya
Hii nidhi you done a great work It is short and sweet
Short but sweet..so deep and meaningful. Wonderfully written mam! Loved the content. But We are stronger and bolder than we think..no more fears let’s get up and fight back
Thank you so much Harshini❤️
Thank you@Sajjithra Subbian
Being girl is not a thing to be afraid. Be bold and courageous.
Thank you
Be bold and courageous. Being a girl is not a thing to be afraid.
Thank you ❤️
Its good and amazing stuff but still you can improvise your writing by telling the details of what makes a girl fear to such extend , what are the problems she is facing which are getting neglected.
Thank you@Amrita Jain. I value your support and encouragement. I’ll keep that in mind.
its good and amazing stuff but still it can be improved if you state the details like what makes a girl fear so much..what are her stuffs which are getting neglected.
Thank you Amrita
I loved your poem. It takes alot of courage to speak about our fears and you did that. Proud of you
Thank you @Isra Meraj
I loved your poem. It takes a lot of courage to speak about our fears but you did it. Proud of you.
Thank you ❤️
The poem is so deep that every girl ca relate to it
Glad you liked it@Suja P
Just wow. Clearly reflects your amazing thoughts. Loved it.
Thank you so much@vidhigupta
Amazing work. Loved it.
Thank you ✌️
loved it!
Grateful❤️
Amazing piece of work. Really loved it. So good thoughts.
Thank you so much@Vidhi Gupta
That was expressing yourself through poetry, well and nice. I think you should write more and more, good luck:)
Thank you so much @Smrithi.S. I’ll keep writing.
Good piece of work. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the spirit of writing
Thank you so much@Sree rekha k zenith
Beautiful words…Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much@Elysia Fernandes
Beautiful words… Keep up the great work
Thank you for your support
Well explained which most of the girls feel or experience.
I believe you should not be afraid of being a girl.
Take a stand for yourself, be the one who can make a man afraid of themselves, be strong, because once in a lifetime every girl goes through such trauma but we need not to lose hope rather we need to to blossom and grow in such a way that no dares to break is down☺️
Thank you so much Kanishka❤️
Umm that was something deep , and a dard reality but you need add more things to it as this short message won’t be enough for people to understand
Thank you so much sameta❤️ will keep that in mind.
As being a girl I do relate to you. But we cannot ignore the fact that we cannot change ourselves but we can change the thought process of ourselves and the people around us! It’s human tendency to make people feel low and unconfidential. It also depends on how well you take that as a positive thing and react. Lastly I just wanna say girl, you got your own crown and tiara to look after so never ever give up in life… God has made you because maybe he knows that you will make this place worth living and don’t forget that he has given us the power to bring a life upon this whole beautiful world…! To all girls and women out there stay strong and bold coz that’s what queens do. Be proud and enjoy your womenhood❤☺
Thank you so much Rithika❤️
Heyy Nidhi
This piece of your work is quite amazing
I guess every girl out there can personally relate this at some point
Even me being girl I agree to that too at some point
Good luck!
Thank you so much kritika ❤️
Well said @Nidhi Dahiya
Thank you ❤️
Wow… Nidhi… Its really good. Its quite interesting how you covered all our insecurities as a girl… Well written!
Thank you so much Yamini❤️
The way you putted up this feeling Is appreciable. Keep going with expressing out yourself .
Anything u want to share if you seek getting help for way is open always.
Thank you for your concern Ragini❤️ I appreciate your support.
How deep is that ♀️
Thank you ❤️Gurleen
It was nicely penned.your words are like so pure as anything else in the world.
Thank you very much ❤️
It’s amazing! keep writing!!
Thank you so much ❤️
Very nicely penned .your words are easy to read and it is pure.
Thank you so much ❤️
it’s amazing!!
Thank you so much ❤️kshithi
written beautifully. sometimes the words are just enough to express the feelings.
True…can’t agree more. Thank you Tanisha❤️
Nidhi Dahiya must say one of the finest work I found here. The way you have coined the word is bowing my mind. Your writings are just carry such deep emotions , they can just be sensed through words. keep up the good work .looking forward for more amazing content.
Glad you liked it. Appreciate your support and encouragement ❤️
Nice work and superb lines keep going .
Thank you so much sanyogita❤️
Lovely.. would love to read more
Thank you so much Radhika❤️
Always proud to be a girl!❤️✨
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Such an amazing work!
Thank you Dikhsha❤️
Very touching. Looking forward for more such contents.
Thank you so much Ami ❤️
This poem is so very true and has so many emotions contained within it. Absolutely beautiful! I know things may seem hard at times.<3 But hold up your head high princess and show people who you truly are! 😀
Thank you so much Soumya❤️
Hi @Nidhi Dahiya!
This poem is amazingly penned down. In these short and few lines, you have managed to strike each and every crunch point.
Overall, the poem is well-written. The topic is related to the need of the hour and is a must-read for everyone.
Best wishes,
Sneha
Thank you so much for your encouragement ❤️
It’s an amazing poem I and every girl can relate to this and your writing is amazing.
Thank you so much Aanandi❤️
This is a very relatable stuff and I like the way you write it’s good that it’s short …keep the good work
Thank you so much Shobha❤️
hi!! This is wonderful poem. I am a budding feminist and i feel that instead of being scared, you should embrace and love yourself;. You should be comfortable and confident in your skin. You need to ignore your haters and keep the people who love you close to you. I hope this helps you.
Thank you so much Shubhangi ❤️ appreciate your support and encouragement.
Its good and amazing stuff but still you can improvise your writing by telling the details of what makes a girl fear to such extend , what are the problems she is facing which are getting neglected.
Thank you so much Rashmi ❤️ duly noted it.
You said some very deep things in just a few lines, it was a pleasure reading it. Well done!
Thank you so much Prerna❤️
I feel every line of this poem. Well done
Thank you so much Tanisha ❤️
I’m very impressed with your skills and I was truly glad to read it! It’s kinda sad how almost every girl can relate to this, and being afraid in everything? Which the privileged people might feel are ‘ small ‘ but we know how it is, don’t we?
Thank you for sharing this with us! Sending all the power and love your way :’)
Thank you so much ❤️