Hey guys, can I have your thoughts on sexting. There are editing fallacies in the article.

I have a couple of apprehensions about this article. First of all "children" should not sext because that is a very serious crime and it should be clarified what age group of people should ideally engage in sexting.  Secondly, to make the article more inclusive, it is important to note that person are attracted to people of many genders. We cannot assume the sexuality of people so please avoid using phrases such as "opposite sex". Overall great attempt. 

https://buddingpsychologists.org/impact-of-teenage-sexting-on-children-and-its-consequences/