Yash Suthar
zindgi bigad du,
ek naya sa symptom du,
work from home kardu,
me to, sirf ek virus hu,
me kisika sapana hu,
(you know that right!)
jo aaj ban chuka hu sach,
ab ye mera sapana hai ki,
sab ke gale me lagu,
aao tujhe bhi me chulu,
mahamari ban felu,
ohhh!! sanitizer,
ha ha ha me hu ek vicious virus,
covid nineteeeeeennn.
-Yash Suthar
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Amazing creativity
Amazing concept and very creative. Keep writing!
Wonderfull
Loved this really so nice and creative of you !
Aah this song i remember. From childhood.. It’s does have a long lasted memory just like this covid ninteeeeeeen has
Hello,
Thank you very much for this funny and beautiful poem, I can not stop thinking about this song. The Doraemon song is one of the best songs of my childhood. I am sure it will stay in my head for another week.
So creative!
I see alot of lateral thinking happenings!
That is really cute….. Nice, innovative and entertaining ❤️ keep writing more
This is just so beautiful!! I think you just described covid -19 rightly. This song is like the anthem of this pandemic. But I really wish you added a little introduction or conclusion stating its meaning. The lines are clear to understand for sure but as a writer I’m sure you will have a deeper meaning for it; It would be really helpful if you could add that as well. Just a suggestion!
Hahaha this was hilarious and extremely creative! The rhyme scheme could be made better but fixing a few words here and there but the idea of it is truly splendid
Damnnnn!!! The creativeness with which you’ve written ❤️❤️
Its really describe the situation…
This song is like the anthem of this pandemic…
Full of creativity!
Keep posting!
Fun!
Funny!
Interesting!
Kudos!
Best of luck!
That’s a good stuff.
Very innovative!